The Revise of Nine :: Part One
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A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...
OPENING
[The STAR WARS logo recedes onto a sea of stars followed by a ROLL UP of text that crawls away from the audience.]
OPENING CRAWL
Star Wars: Episode XI
The Rise of Skywalker
A galaxy at war! Following in the footsteps of Darth Vader, SUPREME LEADER KYLO REN stands on the verge of ruling the galaxy through force and fear.
As world after world falls under the jackboot of the First Order, the citizens of the galaxy wonder: Where is General Leia Organa? What has happened to the Resistance? Is there any hope?
Above the planet Coruscant, the remnants of the Republic Fleet prepare to make their last stand against the forces of the First Order, a battle they cannot possibly hope to win...
EXT. SPACE - NEAR CORUSCANT
[The camera descends onto an image of the planet CORUSCANT. Once the capital of the Galactic Republic, the planet has fallen on hard times since the days of the Empire. The planet is much darker than it was in the past, suggesting a massive decline in population. Several ships in the background can be seen jumping into hyperspace; away from the approaching danger. The camera eventually focuses on the REPUBLIC FLEET; a ragtag collection of ships. The flagship in command of the fleet is the ACKBAR.]
INT. ACKBAR - BRIDGE
[Within the ACKBAR, a SKELETON CREW goes about its business. Stress levels are high, accentuated by one CREW MEMBER who drops whatever he was carrying. The commander of the fleet, an ADMIRAL, has his back to the camera as he looks out the main viewport and onto the blackness of space.]
OFFICER #1
(off screen)
Admiral Antilles.
[The ADMIRAL turns towards the camera and is revealed to be WEDGE ANTILLES, a former pilot of the REBELLION who flew with LUKE SKYWALKER's squadron during the days of the Galactic Empire. WEDGE stands before a circular command table, rimmed by a number of OFFICERS.]
WEDGE
Yes?
OFFICER #1
Incoming message, sir.
[A HOLOGRAM of LEIA ORGANA appears over the table. WEDGE recognizes LEIA immediately.]
WEDGE
Your Highness.
LEIA
(hologram)
I wish I had time for pleasantries, Admiral, but the First Order Fleet will be arriving any moment.
WEDGE
(sighs)
I know. We’ve been ordered by the Senate to stand our ground and-
LEIA
(hologram, interrupting)
Listen to me, Wedge, you don’t stand a chance against them. Abandon the Senate and join the Resistance. Your only hope is to-
[The HOLOGRAM of LEIA begins to break up and cuts out. An urgent BEEPING is heard from the command table.]
OFFICER #2
Admiral, a fleet of ships is dropping out of hyperspace in sector 5!
WEDGE
They’re here.
EXT. SPACE
[Dozens of FIRST ORDER STAR DESTROYERS suddenly appear in space. The REPUBLIC SHIPS are instantly overmatched; the ACKBAR being the only REPUBLIC SHIP comparable in size to any individual STAR DESTROYER.]
INT. ECLIPSE - BRIDGE
[The last STAR DESTROYER to appear is a massive command ship called ECLIPSE. On the bridge of ECLIPSE, watching out of the main view port is SUPREME LEADER KYLO REN. GENERAL HUX strides up to and stands beside KYLO REN.]
KYLO REN
(calmly)
Destroy them all.
HUX
(yelling)
All wings, open fire!
EXT. SPACE
[The STAR DESTROYERS begin shooting at the REPUBLIC SHIPS while FIRST ORDER TIE FIGHTERS swoop in and engage the REPUBLIC X-WINGS and other FIGHTERS. The action is fast and furious. Things do not go well for the REPUBLIC and multiple capital ships are soon destroyed.]
INT. ACKBAR - BRIDGE
[Onboard the ACKBAR, the crew is jostled as the ship is hit with cannon fire. There is overlapping conversation among the BRIDGE CREW as orders are given and reports are received.]
WEDGE
(giving orders)
Picket ships, turn to point oh five and concentrate fire on the nearest Star Destroyer.
(under his breath)
We’re not going to last very long.
OFFICER #2
Admiral, new contacts emerging from hyperspace in zone 9.
WEDGE
First Order?
OFFICER #2
No it's... It's the Resistance.
EXT. SPACE
[Several MEDIUM TRANSPORT SHIPS and STAR FIGHTERS drop out of hyperspace, led by the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
[POE DAMERON and CHEWBACCA (“CHEWIE”) are at the controls of the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
POE
(yelling over his shoulder)
How we doin’ on those lateral controls?
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - PASSENGER LOUNGE
[In the PASSENGER LOUNGE of the MILLENNIUM FALCON are ROSE TICO, FINN and R2-D2 (“ARTOO”). The three are working on some broken part of the ship. ROSE is down inside of the access pit doing the dirty work while FINN and R2-D2 do their best to assist.]
FINN
(yelling back to Poe)
She's almost got it!
POE
(off screen, yelling)
Well I need it RIGHT NOW ten seconds ago!
[FINN places a hand on ROSE's shoulder. ROSE is oblivious to FINN's touch.]
FINN
(to Rose)
I’d better get on the guns.
ROSE
(blindly agreeing)
Yeah.
(she then realizes)
Hey wait.
[ROSE reaches up and grabs FINN by his vest, leaving a greasy handprint. ROSE pulls FINN down to her and kisses him lightly on the cheek. R2-D2 coos.]
ROSE
For luck.
[FINN smiles and then jumps into the VENTRAL GUN PORT with a high amount of confidence.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
Republic ships, this is General Poe Dameron of the Resistance, we are here to evacuate as many of you as we can. We can’t have you throwing your lives away like this.
[POE closes the transmission and yells back at ROSE.]
POE
(yelling)
Rose! Controls! NOW!
[CHEWBACCA also yells in his native language, agreeing with POE.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - PASSENGER LOUNGE
ROSE
I got it, I got it, I got it!!
[ROSE flips a switch which results in a welcoming WHOOSHING sound. ROSE cheers her accomplishment.]
ROSE
(to R2-D2)
Can you finish up?
[R2-D2 BEEPS in the affirmative.]
ROSE
Thanks!
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - GUN PORT
[ROSE climbs out of the access pit and heads up into the DORSAL GUNPORT on the MILLENNIUM FALCON as FIRST ORDER TIE FIGHTERS attack.]
FINN
You joined the party just in time, Rose.
ROSE
I couldn’t let you get a head start on me.
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON fights its way through the TIE FIGHTERS.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
Finn, three of ‘em coming in, point two.
[CHEWBACCA roars.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - GUN PORT
FINN
Got ‘em.
ROSE
Whoo! Splash two more!
FINN
Yeah, but there's only about TWO HUNDRED more of ‘em out there.
[R2-D2 beeps.]
INT. ECLIPSE - BRIDGE
[On the ECLIPSE, KYLO REN and GENERAL HUX watch the action.]
KYLO REN
(calm but gritting his teeth)
Millennium Falcon. The Resistance.
HUX
Destroy that BLASTED ship!!
INT. ACKBAR - BRIDGE
[The ACKBAR is rocked by another explosion. KLAXONS sound.]
OFFICER #1
Admiral, we have a hull breach along seam 17. We can’t jump to hyperspace.
WEDGE
General Dameron, get as many of my people out of here as you can. Leave us behind. We’ll cover your escape.
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
With all due respect, sir, but to hell with that! You were one of my heroes (OR “idols”) growin’ up and I ain’t leaving you behind. Have your bridge crew stand by, we’re coming for you.
[CHEWBACCA growls at POE who shrugs.]
POE
(charming confidence)
What? You don’t think we can do it?
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON fights its way to the ACKBAR and docks with it. The ACKBAR CREW climbs onboard the MILLENNIUM FALCON and are greeted by R2-D2. Once the ACKBAR BRIDGE CREW has safely transferred, the MILLENNIUM FALCON detaches from the ACKBAR which explodes in short order.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - GUN PORT
ROSE
POE!??
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
Everybody, hang on!
[POE flies through the action as ROSE and FINN keep shooting.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - GUN PORT
FINN
I got nine so far, Rose. How you doing?
ROSE
Only nine? You’re losing your touch! I got-
POE
(yelling)
Look out!
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON takes a hit on its dorsal side. ROSE is knocked out and the DORSAL GUN rendered useless.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - GUN PORT
FINN
Rose? Rose!
[FINN looks up the gunport shaft to see ROSE dangling in the seat above him.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - PASSENGER LOUNGE
[A CONTROL PANEL near R2-D2 begins beeping, like Morse Code. R2-D2 plugs into a terminal and is surprised to be receiving a transmission. R2-D2 chatters rapidly. WEDGE looks at one of his CREW MEMBERS.]
WEDGE
What's he (R2-D2) saying?
CREW MEMBER
(shaking her head)
Something about a coded transmission…
[Meanwhile, FINN has climbed up to the DORSAL GUNPORT and pulls ROSE out of the seat. With the help of the FLAGSHIP CREW, FINN is able to lay ROSE down on the deck of the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
FINN
Rose? Rose, can you hear me? Are you all right?
[ROSE begins to moan.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
Talk to me Finn, what's going on with Rose?
[FINN heads up to the cockpit.]
FINN
She's alive but she's hurt. We gotta get out of here now.
POE
Couldn’t agree more. Chewie?
[CHEWBACCA grunts and both he and POE reach for the hyperspace controls.]
EXT. SPACE
[The remaining REPUBLIC and RESISTANCE ships jump into hyperspace followed by the MILLENNIUM FALCON. Several TIE FIGHTERS jump into hyperspace, chasing after them.]
INT. ECLIPSE - BRIDGE
[On the ECLIPSE, KYLO REN turns away from the main view port and calmly walks to the exit. He passes GENERAL HUX, who is standing over a control station.]
KYLO REN
Ready my shuttle.
EXT. HYPERSPACE
[The RESISTANCE SHIPS fly through HYPERSPACE.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
[On the MILLENNIUM FALCON, a rapid BEEPING comes from one of the controls on the cockpit.]
FINN
They’re still following us!
POE
You go take care of Rose, we’ll handle this. All ships, we got TIEs on our tail and there's only one way to shake ‘em off. Get to the rendezvous point. If we’re not there in a hour, head back to base without us.
[POE looks at CHEWBACCA.]
POE
Ready for this?
FINN
Ready for what?
POE
Lightspeed skipping.
FINN
How do you know how to do that?
[CHEWBACCA groans.]
POE
Yeah, well, Rey's not here, is she?
EXT. SPACE
[POE drops the MILLENNIUM FALCON out of hyperspace. All of the TIE FIGHTERS emerge from hyperspace, following the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON begins LIGHTSPEED SKIPPING from system to system. The reckless maneuvering is especially dangerous for the pursuing TIE FIGHTERS whose numbers dwindle with each skip. Eventually, there is only one TIE FIGHTER following the MILLENNIUM FALCON. The MILLENNIUM FALCON jumps into hyperspace but the lone TIE FIGHTER is crushed.]
EXT. CORUSCANT - SUNSET
[The sun disappears behind the horizon as a COMMAND SHUTTLE descends into the atmosphere, accompanied by six TIE FIGHTERS. The COMMAND SHUTTLE comes to a rest on a landing platform outside of the former GALACTIC SENATE building.]
INT. SENATE BUILDING - ROTUNDA
[KYLO REN, GENERAL HUX and a number of STORMTROOPERS exit the COMMAND SHUTTLE and proceed into the building. They eventually enter the dilapidated and cavernous ROTUNDA. HUX begins laughing.]
HUX
Victory! Now that the First Order has conquered the galaxy, shall we continue to call you Supreme Leader? Or Emperor? Emperor Supreme, maybe?
[KYLO REN is not amused. After a few moments, KYLO REN commands:]
KYLO REN
Send them in.
[STORMTROOPERS usher in a number of SENATORS, REPRESENTATIVES and other ELECTED LEADERS of various races. Some look very fearful, others stoic. They all stand before KYLO REN who begins to pace as he speaks.]
KYLO REN
What a disappointing assembly. You who represent what remains of the Republic Senate. The last remnants of the of that sad, old establishment. Let every leader of every planet, every industry, every tribe, everyone and anyone who commands others; let them understand this: I and I alone rule the galaxy. There is no one who can oppose me. It is useless to resist.
[The SENATORS look at one another, unsure of what they should do. One stern and joyless looking man named ENRIC PRYDE steps forward. PRYDE speaks confidently.]
PRYDE
Supreme Leader.
KYLO REN
And you are?
[HUX recognizes PRYDE.]
HUX
You’re General Pryde. The Imperial strategist who routed the Rebels at the Battle of Catheel.
PRYDE
It's true. I served Lord Vader himself. There are many who wish to see the order, security and prosperity of the Empire return. Many who support you in secret. My (OR “Our”) loyalty is yours, Supreme Leader.
[PRYDE kneels before KYLO REN. KYLO REN contemplates things for a moment, throwing a sideways glance at HUX.]
KYLO REN
Rise.
[PRYDE rises to his feet.]
KYLO REN
You are now Allegiant General Pryde, Commander of the First Order Forces.
HUX
(interjecting, confused)
What!?
KYLO REN
(ignoring Hux)
Take command of my fleet, hunt down the remnants of the Resistance and crush them.
[PRYDE bows his head.]
PRYDE
It will be done, my lord.
[The look on HUX's face is as if he's eaten something extremely sour, but before he can say anything:]
KYLO REN
As for the pretender Jedi. The girl. The one who calls herself Rey. To every planet in the galaxy, hear my words. If you are harboring her, surrender her immediately. Or you …will …burn!
[KYLO REN's threat echoes in the chamber.]
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - JUNGLE - DAY
[Over the past year, the RESISTANCE has grown by very modest numbers. To keep themselves hidden, the RESISTANCE has split into several small cells. Each cell establishes its own temporary base, moving to a new location every few months.]
[The RESISTANCE has built their CENTRAL BASE on the lush SUBTROPICAL MOON in the OSSEON BELT. The camera pans through leafy greens. A few small, scurrying CREATURES move past the camera position. Suddenly, one of the CREATURES is zapped by BB-8's shock prod. The CREATURE scurries away as BB-8 rolls past the camera and towards his destination. Soon, REY's voice can be heard in the near distance, growing louder as BB-8 approaches.]
REY
(off screen)
I am one with the Force and the Force is with me.
[The mantra is repeated a number of times before BB-8 enters a clearing and the camera focuses on REY herself. REY is standing on her hands with her eyes closed. Using the FORCE, REY has lifted a circle of ROCKS - each about the size of a basketball. The ROCKS gently circle around REY.]
[Eventually, REY changes the mantra:]
REY
I am one with the Force and the Force can SEE me. See me. See me. Be with me. Be with me. Be with me. Master Luke, please….
[REY opens her eyes and sighs with disappointment.]
[The ring of ROCKS around REY stop circling and suddenly drop to the ground. One ROCK lands close enough to BB-8 that the droid reflexively backs away. BB-8 beeps in protest. REY summersaults to the ground, coming to rest just before BB-8.]
REY
Sorry about that.
[BB-8 squawks some more. REY is amused.]
REY
I’ll be more careful next time. I promise.
[BB-8 chirps at REY, informing her that she is to return to base.]
REY
All right, let's go.
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - RESISTANCE BASE - DAY
[BB-8 leads REY back to the RESISTANCE BASE, a collection of ships, tents and temporary shelters at the base of mountain. The afternoon shade provides little relief from the heat.]
[In one of the SHELTERS is MAZ KANATA. MAZ is pouring over one of the eight JEDI TEXTS that REY liberated from JEDI TEMPLE on AHCH-TO. MAZ is transcribing words from the book to a computer TABLET next to her. MAZ seems frustrated.]
MAZ
(in Huteese, perturbed)
Why are we in such a stupid hot place like this?
(in English, still perturbed)
Come here, Threepio.
[C-3PO (“THREEPIO”) is in the SHELTER with MAZ and is helping her to translate the texts. C-3PO shuffles over to MAZ.]
C-3PO
Yes, Madam Kanata.
MAZ
We’ve been over this a thousand times Threepio, just call me ‘Maz.’
C-3PO
Begging your pardon mad- ah, Maz… but we’ve only discussed your honorific preference three times prior to this.
MAZ
Stop being so literal and tell me what this phrasing means.
[MAZ points to a specific line in the book she is reading. C-3PO peers over MAZ's shoulder.]
C-3PO
(translating)
Ghaka showhani na ta peacie oulmbrat. Oh! Yes. Well, it seems to be saying-
[REY enters and interrupts.]
REY
BB-8 said you wanted to see me.
[MAZ hops down from her seat and approaches REY. REY averts her eyes as MAZ is NAKED.]
REY
Maz, why aren’t you wearing anything?
MAZ
The heat on this moon is unbearable and I’m too old for shame. Come here. Look at this.
[MAZ leads REY to another corner of the shelter where a slug like creature with very large eyes named KLAUD is looking at another of the JEDI TEXTS. MAZ removes several sheets of paper tucked into the book.]
MAZ
Klaud found this tucked away in the Rammahgon. Here. I don’t know how we missed it until now. These notes here were written by Luke Skywalker himself.
REY
Are you sure?
C-3PO
Oh, yes. That is most definitely Master Luke's handwriting. Notice on the characters with a loop how the-
REY
What does it say?
++While not expressed in as many words, Rey is functionally illiterate. While she can speak and understand several languages, no one on Jakku bothered to teach her to read.++
MAZ
Luke was writing a chronicle about his journey to find the Jedi Texts. But it wasn’t just the books, nor was it the first Jedi Temple he was looking for. He was looking for someONE.
REY
Who was he looking for?
MAZ
He never mentions the person by name. But, here. The trail went cold on the planet Pasaana in the Middian System.
REY
(whispering to herself)
Pasaana.
LEIA
(off screen)
Rey.
[EVERYONE turns to see LEIA ORGANA, Princes of Alderaan and supreme commander of the Resistance in the entrance, accompanied by BB-8. REY approaches LEIA.]
REY
Master. Have you heard anything from Finn and Poe? Are they on their way back?
[LEIA shakes her head.]
LEIA
They engaged the First Order. We’ve heard nothing since.
[REY, MAZ and C-3PO all look at each other. REY sighs and looks up at the sky.]
REY
I should be out there with them.
[LEIA unhooks the LIGHTSABER from REY's belt and holds it up.]
LEIA
You should be out on the training course, young Jedi.
[REY shakes her head.]
REY
I don’t feel like it.
(or)
I’m not in the mood.
[LEIA slaps REY in the face. Hard.]
LEIA
Do you think the First Order (OR “Dark Side” OR “our enemy”) cares about your mood? You must learn to control your emotions, your fear. Focus. Maintain discipline no matter the situation.
[LEIA gives REY a stern look and shakes the LIGHTSABER, putting emphasis on her point.]
[REY, somewhat stunned, takes the LIGHTSABER from LEIA.]
REY
Yes, Master (OR “Mentor” OR “General”).
[REY heads off into the jungle.]
REY
C’mon BB-8.
[BB-8 chirps and follows after REY. LEIA and MAZ watch REY go.]
LEIA
And Maz…
[LEIA undoes the light scarf around her neck and tosses it to MAZ.]
LEIA
(continued)
Cover up, will you?
MAZ
Why? It's just us girls here.
[C-3PO and KLAUD look at each other and groan slightly.]
LEIA
That's an order.
MAZ
(impressed)
Yes, General.
EXT. SPACE - OVER CORUSCANT
[Over CORUSCANT, a distinguished looking transport called the NIGHT BUZZARD flies with immunity through the FIRST ORDER SHIPS orbiting the planet. The NIGHT BUZZARD lands at the SENATE BUILDING and the KNIGHTS OF REN emerge from the ship.]
INT. SENATE BUILDING
[The KNIGHS OF REN enter KYLO REN's quarters. Two of the KNIGHTS cary a CASE between them. KYLO REN opens the CASE, revealing the charred and melted mask of DARTH VADER. KYLO REN closes his eyes, places his hand on VADER's mask and begins searching for REY through the FORCE.]
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - JUNGLE - LATE AFTERNOON
[Meanwhile, REY runs a TRAINING COURSE that weaves through the jungle. The course is designed to test various physical skills including LIGHTSABER combat against floating TRAINING REMOTES. While distracted and worried for her friends, REY proceeds through the course with little issue.]
[The hot and humid jungle seemingly becomes cold to REY as an unnatural shadow falls over everything. REY experiences a familiar and unwelcome feeling: a DYAD MOMENT. REY sees flashes of strong memories, many involving KYLO REN. REY turns to see a FORCE PROJECTION of KYLO REN standing behind her.]
KYLO
(dyad moment)
Come to me.
[REY activates her LIGHTSABER and swings at the FORCE PROJECTION but KYLO REN disappears. REY's LIGHTSABER cuts through a tree which falls to the ground.]
INT. SENATE BUILDING
[KYLO REN removes his hand from DARTH VADER's mask. Smoke rises up from the mask. KYLO REN holds back a deep rage. KYLO REN grabs DARTH VADER's mask and throws it to the feet of a SITH ALCHEMIST named ALBREKH, a deformed creature.]
KYLO REN
Melt it down.
[ALBREKH nods as KYLO REN exits the room.]
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - JUNGLE - LATE AFTERNOON
[REY deactivates her LIGHTSABER and looks around, the cold feeling has gone away; the jungle is once again a hot and humid place. REY breathes heavily but her focus is soon broken by BB-8's quiet beeping. REY realizes that the fallen tree has landed on BB-8, pinning him in place.]
REY
Oh, BB-8! I’m sorry.
[REY works to free BB-8 but a booming noise overhead catches her attention. REY looks up and sees the RESISTANCE and REPUBLIC ships fly overhead. BB-8 chirps.]
REY
They’re back!
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - RESISTANCE BASE - SUNSET
[REY and BB-8 return to the RESISTANCE BASE as PILOTS debark their ships and TECHNICAL CREWS get to work. Standing amid the confusion is LEIA. One of the lead pilots, SNAP WEXLEY removes his helmet and reports to LEIA.]
SNAP
(crestfallen)
General Organa, it was a massacre. Just like you predicted.
LEIA
Poe, Chewie and Finn, where are they?
[REY approaches them with some urgency and asks the same question.]
REY
Where's the Falcon?
[SNAP shakes his head.]
SNAP
TIE fighters followed us into hyperspace. Poe drew them off. We waited for them at the rendezvous point for as long as we could. But….
[REY turns away in disbelief and aimlessly wanders to the edge of the landing zone. SNAP is at a loss for words. LEIA puts a comforting hand on SNAP's shoulder.]
LEIA
It's all right, Commander. Get some rest.
[SNAP heads off. LEIA walks over to REY who fights back tears.]
REY
They’re alive. They have to be. I would have felt it if they…
[REY cannot bring herself to say “if they died.” A few moments pass before LEIA speaks.]
LEIA
In all my years, all my adventures, all that I’ve seen and all that I’ve done there are two things I’ve always been able to count on. And one of them is: the Millennium Falcon always comes home.
WIPE TO:
INT. FORGE
[KYLO REN stands on the periphery of a hellish looking room. ALBREKH and his MINIONS go about their work. They have partially reconstructed KYLO REN's mask - which KYLO REN destroyed in a fit of rage following criticism from SUPREME LEADER SNOKE.]
[DARTH VADER's mask is put into a crucible and melted down. The glowing red liquid metal is then used to fuse the pieces of KYLO REN's mask back together - making it appear cracked and scarred.]
[ALBREKH presents the completed MASK to KYLO REN who holds it in his hands and admires the work.]
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - MOUNTAIN - MIDNIGHT
[REY and LEIA sit on the side of the mountain, above the tree line, looking out onto the stars.]
LEIA
You know, I think I rather prefer to be called Princess instead of General. General is too “stuffy.” Princess is…. good and bossy.
REY
He reached out to me. When I was on the training course. Kylo… Ben. He told me to come to him.
LEIA
Now that he's conquered the galaxy, you are the only threat left to him.
REY
Don’t you mean we are? Us?
[LEIA shakes her head.]
LEIA
I’m no Jedi. All I can do is give you some advice, train you to a limited extent.
REY
You may not be a Jedi, but you are his mother.
LEIA
Rey. When you confront him. You must not show him mercy.
[LEIA's ruthless statement is perplexing to REY.]
REY
How can you-?
LEIA
(interrupting)
He will use your emotions to his advantage and destroy you. I loved my son. More than you can ever know. But the Dark Side has taken him from me. Whatever Kylo Ren is, he is not my son. You are our last hope.
[REY is speechless for a moment as LEIA's words sink in.]
REY
I… I’ve been trying to contact Luke though the Force. But he won’t answer me.
LEIA
Years ago, Luke would speak to me of balance in the Force. Neither you nor Ben have a true master to guide you anymore. If there is balance between the two of you, it's uncontrolled. Unguided. Unstable. You have to follow your own path, Rey. With your heart and soul as compass.
[Both LEIA and REY look into the sky and see a SHOOTING STAR which comes closer and closer and closer. REY finally realizes that it's not a SHOOTING STAR at all.]
REY
The Falcon!
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - RESISTANCE BASE - LANDING ZONE - MIDNIGHT
[REY runs to the landing zone as the MILLENNIUM FALCON comes to a rest. The MILLENNIUM FALCON is on FIRE! RESISTANCE TECHS clamor to help extinguish the flames.]
TECH #1
Come on, get over here!
TECH #2
I need a fire crew here! And another one in the back! Go, go!!!
TECH #3
Coming!
[The survivors of the ACKBAR emerge from the MILLENNIUM FALCON. REY watches in disbelief. BB-8 approaches REY and beeps. POE is the first familiar face to emerge from the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
POE
It's on fire! Whole thing's on fire. All of it. On fire!
REY
Hey.
POE
Hey.
REY
How did it go?
POE
Really bad, actually. Really bad. Could have used your help out there.
REY
The Falcon…
[POE looks at BB-8 and notices the damage BB-8 sustained when the tree fell on him.]
POE
What'd you do to the droid?
REY
What'd you do the Falcon?
POE
The Falcon's in a lot better shape than he is.
REY
BB-8's not on fire.
POE
What's left of him isn’t on fire!
REY
Tell me what happened.
POE
You tell me first.
REY
You know what you are?
POE
What?
REY
You’re difficult. Really difficult. You’re a difficult man.
POE
You… You are....
[POE and REY groan simultaneously and go their separate ways. REY sees FINN who is attending to ROSE.]
REY
Finn! Rose! Are you okay?
ROSE
I’m fine.
FINN
She got knocked out. You’re going to the medbay.
ROSE
I told you, I’m fine. I don’t need a doctor.
FINN
Chewie.
[CHEWBACCA barks as he scoops ROSE up into his arms.]
ROSE
Hey! Put me down!
FINN
Take her to see the Doc.
[CHEWBACCA grunts.]
ROSE
Ugh! Chewie, you really need a bath!
REY
What happened?
[CHEWBACCA, as he walks away carrying ROSE, answers REY. POE returns with a FIRE EXTINGUISHER.]
REY
You lightspeed skipped?
POE
Yeah, well, it got us back here, didn’t it?
REY
You can’t lightspeed skip the Falcon!
POE
Actually, it turns out you can!
FINN
All right, guys, we just landed.
REY
So, bad mood?
FINN
Me?
[REY points at POE who begins using the woefully small FIRE EXTINGUISHER on the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
REY
Him.
FINN
Always.
[While the young heroes argue among themselves, the veteran leaders WEDGE and LEIA reunite. WEDGE approaches LEIA, holding his head in shame.]
WEDGE
Your Highness. Ah, I mean, General Organa. It- It's good to see you again.
[LEIA smiles and hugs WEDGE, who was not expecting the affection.]
LEIA
Welcome home, Wedge.
[The two of them look at the commotion around the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
WEDGE
It's quite the crew you have here.
[LEIA chuckles.]
LEIA
Yes, they certainly are.
WEDGE
(sighing)
I guess it's over then. The First Order has conquered the last remnants of the Republic. There's nothing left to fight for.
LEIA
We still have Rey. We still have hope.
[C-3PO and R2-D2 approach LEIA.]
C-3PO
Pardon me General Organa but Artoo has some important information.
[R2-D2 beeps.]
WIPE TO:
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - RESISTANCE BASE - LATER
[Most of the RESISTANCE BASE CREW are gathered under the forward section of a CORELLIAN CORVETTE for a briefing. Everyone is standing around a TABLE which projects holographic images into the air. Several HOLOGRAMS of LEADERS at other Resistance bases are mixed in with the live crew. POE and FINN lead the briefing.]
POE
There is a spy in the First Order. During the battle, he sent an encoded information packet which Artoo intercepted.
[R2-D2 chirps triumphantly.]
FINN
The packet was sent in three streams but we jumped away before getting all of the information.
POE
But what we got was enough. In order to subdue the galaxy, the First Order has built what they are calling Death Fleet. One thousand ships, each one armed with a massive heavy cannon.
FINN
Do you remember the battering ram cannon they used on Crait? It's the exact same concept only mounted on a new type of Star Destroyer.
++ YouTube animator Howard Day created the Magister-class Star Destroyer. While the ships of the Death Fleet will not be as big as the Magister-class, I like the general design of the ship and imagine something like it for the Death Fleet ships.++
POE
Any individual ship has firepower greater than a dreadnaught. And when that power is combined…
[POE projects a simulation of the DEATH FLEET. One thousand ships surround a planet and fire upon it, destroying the simulated planet. Everyone in the briefing is stunned.]
CONNIX
It's the Death Star all over again.
C-3PO
Oh, my!
BEAUMONT
At least the Death Star was a single target. You said a thousand ships?
POE
That's right. The intel indicates that the fleet will be operational in approximately sixteen hours.
FINN
And then they will choose one unsuspecting world for a demonstration.
[CHEWBACCA growls.]
WEDGE
Then we need to stop them.
BEAUMONT
Begging your pardon, Admiral, but with what?
SNAP
We don’t have a big enough fleet to take them on.
CONNIX
And no one is willing to supply us with hyperfuel, munitions and parts for repairs.
[An argument breaks out with overlapping conversation.]
ROSE
(off screen)
Why don’t we steal one of their ships?
[Everyone grows quiet and turns to look at ROSE who is holding an ice pack to her head.]
ROSE
The schematics show that these ships have minimal crew. We sneak onto one, assume control and use it to destroy as many of the others as we can.
[POE looks at ROSE and the wheels in his head begin to turn.]
CONNIX
But they’ll have nine hundred and ninety-nine guns pointing right back at us.
FINN
Yeah… one other big problem with that.
[FINN keys some controls and a partial map of the galaxy appears. Once section of the map is highlighted.]
FINN
(continued)
Artoo only got part of the coordinates before we jumped away. We know the fleet's somewhere in the Bertholds Sector.
BEAUMONT
We don’t even know where they are?
CONNIX
There are at least a hundred and fifty systems in that sector.
[POE bites his lip and smiles as ROSE's plan sinks in.]
POE
Not if we make contact with the spy again.
WEDGE
What?
POE
We take the Falcon back to Core, run a few laps around the planet…
FINN
Evade all the star destroyers….
POE
(continuing)
…make contact with the spy again,…
ROSE
Get shot at….
POE
(continuing)
…get the information we need and steal one of those Death Ships. We keep fighting. We show the galaxy that the First Order is vulnerable and system after system will rise up and join us.
FINN
That's a pretty ambitious plan.
POE
How long have you known me?
CONNIX
No one came to help us on Crait. Why should they help us now?
MAZ
Because tyranny has its jaws around the throat of freedom. No one in the galaxy can deny that fact now. Appeasement? Ignorance? Collaboration? No. Once a tyrant has risen to power the only way to restore liberty is with action. To fight for it!
[MAZ looks at LEIA who nods in approval.]
[More overlapping conversation breaks out. BB-8 begins beeping excitedly.]
C-3PO
Oh my! BB-8 is picking up a galaxy-wide transmission from Coruscant.
LEIA
Let's hear it.
[C-3PO clicks a number of buttons on the control panel. A HOLOGRAM of KYLO REN appears. Both LEIA and REY have emotional reactions to seeing KYLO REN.]
KYLO REN
(hologram)
The galaxy is now under the control of the First Order. I call upon all systems to submit my authority. Failure to do so will be met swiftly and with the harshest of measures. Hiding somewhere in the Outer Rim are the remains of the pitiful Resistance. Among them is a girl named Rey. Whoever brings her to me alive will be given wealth beyond imagination. But I warn any world who harbors her, you will feel the full wrath of the New Order. If you show her mercy, no mercy will be shown to you. Her life will be your death.
[The transmission ends abruptly. Everyone looks at REY who stands stunned at what she's just heard. REY begins to realize that everyone is looking at her. REY then shrinks away and leaves the briefing.]
FINN
Rey.
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - RESISTANCE BASE
[REY leads FINN a fair distance away from the briefing. The two are alone.]
FINN
Rey.
REY
He's going to do it, Finn. He's going to use that fleet and blow up entire worlds, destroy civilizations to get to me. Me. Why does he hate me so much?
FINN
Because you are everything he isn’t. Rey, I know you….
REY
People keep telling me they know me. I’m afraid no one does.
(OR)
People keep telling me they know me. But who am I? I’m just… Rey. Rey nobody.
[REY walks off into the darkness. FINN watches her go. BB-8 approaches FINN and beeps, asking a question. FINN does not answer and BB-8 beeps sadly.]
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - MOUNTAIN PEAK
[REY climbs the mountain. Standing at the peak, REY watches as the sun begins to rise.]
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - RESISTANCE BASE - LEIA’S TENT - MORNING
[The next morning, REY approaches LEIA's tent. LEIA has changed her clothing and is wearing a more formal looking dress. REY feels like she is interrupting.]
REY
I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to disturb you.
LEIA
Not at all. Actually, I could use some help.
[LEIA indicates to the NECKLACE in her hands. REY steps behind LEIA and helps with the closure on the NECKLACE.]
++This is the same necklace Leia wore during the award ceremony the end of A New Hope. Google “Princess Leia necklace” if you really want to see it++
REY
I have to go. It's dangerous for me to be here. I’m putting everyone at risk.
LEIA
Rey…
REY
No! My mind is made up. I could have left last night but I didn’t want to leave without telling you… Without saying…
[REY becomes emotional. A single tear runs down REY's cheek. LEIA embraces REY.]
LEIA
I know.
EXT. SUBTROPICAL MOON - RESISTANCE BASE - LANDING ZONE - MOMENTS LATER
[REY, with a variety of gear slung over her shoulder, approaches the MILLENNIUM FALCON. POE and FINN are standing at the entry ramp, waiting for her.]
REY
You were right. It's time for me to get out there.
[POE slaps FINN in the chest.]
POE
Told you.
FINN
No, I told you.
POE
(to Rey)
We’re going with you.
REY
Absolutely not! This is something I need to do alone.
FINN
Yeah, alone with friends.
[POE heads up into the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
POE
Chewie, you get that compressor working?
[CHEWBACCA, from inside the MILLENNIUM FALCON, grunts.]
REY
(to Finn)
It's too dangerous.
FINN
We go together.
REY
And Rose?
FINN
I told her to sit this one out. She's not happy with me.
[BB-8's beeping grabs REY's attention. REY turns to see BB-8, C-3PO and R2-D2 behind her.]
REY
Oh, not you three too?
[R2-D2 beeps.]
C-3PO
Artoo will be staying here to attend to Mistress Leia.
REY
All right, then.
[REY heads into the MILLENNIUM FALCON. R2-D2 beeps and then extends a plug that couples with BB-8 who chirps.]
C-3PO
You’ve giving the data you already received to BB-8? Why not give it to me?
[R2-D2 beeps angrily.]
C-3PO
Fair enough.
[BB-8 heads into the MILLENNIUM FALCON. C-3PO turns to R2-D2.]
C-3PO
In the event that I do not return.... I want you to know that you have been a real friend Artoo. My best one, in fact.
[R2-D2 beeps happily.]
POE
(from inside the MILLENNIUM FALCON)
Hurry up Threepio or we’re leaving you behind.
C-3PO
Oh!
[C-3PO heads into the MILLENNIUM FALCON. R2-D2 wheels over to the edge of the landing zone and joins LEIA and MAZ as they watch the MILLENNIUM FALCON depart.]
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON zooms past the camera position.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - PASSENGER LOUNGE
[Within the MILLENNIUM FALCON the heroes have gathered in the passenger lounge. CHEWBACCA is seated at the table while everyone else mulls around.]
FINN
So? What's our plan?
REY
(indecisive)
I guess we’ll go to Pasanna. Luke Skywalker was searching for someone there. We find out who and-
POE
Yeah… No we don’t.
FINN
Poe?
POE
She wants to take us to Pasanna, leave us there and then go and confront Kylo Ren alone, on your own, right?
[CHEWBACCA growls. ROSE unexpectedly enters the passenger lounge from the Captain's quarters. BB-8 beeps at ROSE’s arrival.]
ROSE
(casually)
What's going on?
[EVERYONE is surprised to see ROSE.]
FINN
Wha-? Where did you come from?
ROSE
I stowed away in the secret overhead compartment in the closet of the Captain's quarters. I figured you’d find me eventually, so… no point in hiding any longer.
[EVERYONE just looks at ROSE.]
ROSE
(a bit sheepish)
Am I the only one who knew about the secret overhead compartment in the closet of the Captain's quarters?
[POE snaps back to reality.]
POE
Okay, fine. Rose, welcome to our little suicide mission. Rey was about to explain her plan to ditch us and go it alone.
FINN
Rey, is this true?
[REY, ashamed, says nothing.]
POE
Don’t feel bad, Rey. You’re the best fighter we got but as a strategist… you always charge in with the direct approach.
FINN
High praise, coming from the source.
[CHEWBACCA laughs. BB-8 chirps.]
POE
Uh-huh. But Kylo Ren will use that fleet against the galaxy regardless if you surrender to him or not. We’re not gonna let you sacrifice yourself like this.
[FINN nods his head. CHEWBACCA grunts. BB-8 chirps.]
ROSE
(agreeing)
That's right.
C-3PO
Together.
[C-3PO places a hand on CHEWBACCA's shoulder. CHEWBACCA looks at C-3PO who abruptly removes his hand.]
[REY says nothing for a few moments.]
REY
Then we need to make contact with that spy again. Go to Coruscant. Learn where that fleet is.
POE
That's more like it. Chewie?
[CHEWBACCA stands up, grunts, and heads to the cockpit.]
POE
Finn, Rose, you’re on the guns.
ROSE
Yes!
POE
BB-8, get ready to intercept that signal. [Did] Artoo tell you what to listen for?
[BB-8 chirps.]
POE
Good.
REY
And me?
POE
It's your mission. You fly the Falcon.
REY
Me? You’re the better pilot.
POE
Better?
REY
By a very slight, almost imperceptible, margin.
POE
Imperceptible? That's a big word.
REY
Yes it is, would you like a definition?
POE
Well, if you’re flying the Falcon, you won’t be tempted to jump into an escape pod and surrender to Kylo Ren.
[REY bites her tongue and the look in her eyes reveals that POE did indeed figure out her “plan B”. POE taps his temple with one finger.]
POE
Ah! See how I got you figured out.
REY
(unhappy)
You are a difficult man.
[REY, in a huff, heads to the cockpit.]
POE
(smiling)
Yeah, I know.
[C-3PO, standing behind POE, wonders:]
C-3PO
Um, General Dameron… What is my role in all of this?
POE
I dunno. Don’t annoy anyone?
(or)
I dunno. Think you can get through one mission without annoying anyone?
[POE heads to the bridge, leaving C-3PO to himself.]
C-3PO
Well… I’ll certainly try my best.
INT. ECLIPSE
[TWO TECHNICIANS go about their work as KYLO REN and the KNIGHTS OF REN pass by them.]
TECHNICIAN #1
The Knights of Ren.
TECHNICIAN #2
Ghouls.
INT. ECLIPSE - CONFERENCE ROOM
[Meanwhile, in a conference room aboard the ECLIPSE, GENERAL HUX and the MASTERMIND COUNCIL - a collection of high echelon First Order Admirals and Generals - are waiting for KYLO REN's arrival.]
SAMAR BAJJ
This is ridiculous. Why must we continue to hunt down the Resistance? The galaxy is under our control.
RIJOH ONNASAN
The Supreme Leader's obsession with this Jedi is putting everything we’ve accomplished at risk.
SAMAR BAJJ
Is she even really a Jedi? If the rumors are true and Luke Skywalker is dead, what sort of threat can she possibly pose?
VINNER RIKERSH
I’d choose your words more carefully. They could be misconstrued as treasonous.
MORRICH QUANDARD
Personally, I am more concerned about our sudden change in leadership. General Pryde was well respected in the days of the Empire-
RIJOH ONNASAN
(interrupting)
The “days of the Empire” are long gone. He's done nothing in the service of the First Order yet he's given command over our entire military operation? Leader Snoke would never have done anything so rash.
VINNER RIKERSH
You’ve been uncharacteristically quiet about all of this, General Hux. How does it feel to be demoted so quickly after reaching the pinnacle moment of your career?
[Before HUX can answer, GENERAL PRYDE enters the conference room. There is an awkward silence as PRYDE wordlessly crosses the room and stands before his chair at the end of the table.]
[KYLO REN then enters. HUX gives RIKERSH a deadly stare as everyone around the table rises to their feet out of respect.]
PRYDE
Be seated, all of you.
[All of the FIRST ORDER OFFICERS return to their seats. KYLO REN remains standing and looks out of the window located behind GENERAL PRYDE. KYLO REN has a panoramic view of the FIRST ORDER STAR DESTROYERS in orbit of CORUSCANT.]
KYLO REN
I sense unease from you, General Hux.
HUX
Me? Well… the new mask is a touch unnerving, Supreme Leader.
MORRICH QUANDARD
I like it.
PRYDE
I have analyzed all of the reports on Resistance activities in the Outer Rim. The current theory that the Resistance is massed on a single world is incorrect. The Resistance has reverted to the tactics used by the Rebellion and split into multiple, smaller cells. Each independent but operating with the direction of a central command base.
KYLO REN
The satellite bases mean nothing to me. I want their leadership captured or destroyed.
PRYDE
Then I will have the location of their command base to you within the hour, Supreme Leader.
[Some of the other leaders, including HUX, scoff at the idea.]
SAMAR BAJJ
Supreme Leader, the war is over. We must consolidate and pacify the core worlds, increase recruitments and harvest more of the galaxy's young; not spreading ourselves thin in the Outer Rim searching for one girl.
PRYDE
Careful General.
SAMAR BAJJ
My apologies, General Pryde. After all, you are new here. On this council, stating the facts has always been encouraged. Something you’d be aware of if today wasn’t your first day on the job-
[SAMAR BAJJ begins choking. KYLO REN continues to look out of the window and into space as SAMAR BAJJ rises to his feet and hunches over the table, gasping for air.]
KYLO REN
Allegiant General Pryde's command is absolute. Is that understood?
ALL
Yes, Supreme Leader.
KYLO REN
Good. Now…
[KYLO REN watches as the MILLENNIUM FALCON appears out of hyperspace some distance away, heading towards CORUSCANT. KYLO REN immediately releases his grip on SAMAR BAJJ - who is now blue in the face. SAMAR BAJJ falls into his seat, coughing and breathing heavily. Moments later KLAXONS begin to sound. As the MASTERMIND COUNCIL clamors to learn what is happening, KYLO REN heads to the exit.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
[Onboard the MILLENNIUM FALCON, REY is in the pilot's seat with POE standing over her shoulder, uncomfortably close.]
POE
Patrol fighters coming in, point seven.
REY
Yes, I know how to read the controls, thank you.
POE
Finn? Rose?
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - GUN PORT
FINN
We’re on ‘em.
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
BB-8, anything yet?
[BB-8 chirps in the negative.]
POE
Let us know as soon as you get something.
REY
Here they come!
[CHEWBACCA grunts.]
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON fights through the first wave of TIE FIGHTERS.]
[Intense battle action, details TBD, culminating with:]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
Turn to point three, there's a Star Destroyer on an intercept course.
REY
I see it. I also see the one…
POE & REY SIMLUTANIOUS
Coming in at point one-eight-oh.
[CHEWBACCA groans.]
[The two STAR DESTROYERS try to pinch the MILLENNIUM FALCON.]
POE
This is getting tight!
REY
Only one way to go.
POE
Yeah. Up!
REY
Down!
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON noses over and heads straight down towards the surface of CORUSCANT. Swarms of TIE FIGHTERS emerge from the STAR DESTROYERS.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - GUN PORT
FINN
Oh, yeah. Rey, we got every TIE Fighter in the First Order coming right at us.
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
Keep heading to the surface. We can shake ‘em.
EXT. CORUSCANT - SKY
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON heads into the atmosphere of CORUSCANT with scores of TIE FIGHTERS following it. Leading the TIE FIGHTERS is one distinguished fighter flown by KYLO REN himself.]
[More intense battle action as they fly through CORUSCANT, details TBD.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - PASSENGER LOUNGE
[BB-8 begins chattering rapidly as he picks up the signal from the FIRST ORDER SPY.]
C-3PO
Oh! Oh, my! General Dameron! BB-8 is picking up the signal.
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
POE
‘Bout blasted time! Rey, head back up to orbit. BB, let me know when you got the whole thing buddy.
EXT. CORUSCANT - SKY
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON passes the old SENATE BUILDING with the swarm of TIE FIGHTERS following it. Both REY and KYLO REN begin to lose focus, as if they can both hear some invisible call.]
[REY and KYLO REN experience a DYAD MOMENT.]
KYLO REN
(dyad moment)
What is that?
REY
(dyad moment)
You hear it too?
KYLO REN
(dyad moment)
Yes. It- It sounds like…
REY
(dyad moment)
Singing?
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
[Meanwhile, back in reality…]
POE
Rey? Rey! Ah, this is a really bad time to space out on us, Rey!
FINN
What's going on up there?
[CHEWBACCA growls.]
POE
Yep. I’m on it!
[POE wraps his arms around REY and pulls her out of the pilot's seat. POE places REY in the passenger seat behind CHEWBACCA. POE then jumps into the pilot's seat.]
POE
How we doin’ BB!?
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - PASSENGER LOUNGE
[An indicator light near BB-8 clicks and turns GREEN. BB-8 chatters excitedly.]
C-3PO
BB-8 reports the data is fully downloaded.
POE
Fantastic, let's get out of here!
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON heads into space followed by all of the TIE FIGHTERS.]
INT. MILLENNIUM FALCON - COCKPIT
[REY is still in the passenger seat and acting strangely.]
REY
(to herself)
Master Luke…?
POE
Punch it!
[CHEWBACCA barks.]
EXT. SPACE
[The MILLENNIUM FALCON jumps into hyperspace. The TIE FIGHTERS, led by KYLO REN continue on but do not follow the MILLENNIUM FALCON into hyperspace. KYLO REN's TIE FIGHTER slowly comes to a stop, leading the swarm behind him to also slow and stop. The fleet of TIE FIGHTERS hangs motionless in space.]
INT. KYLO REN’S TIE FIGHTER
[KYLO REN sits quietly in the cockpit of his fighter, a bit confused about what has just happened to him.]
TIE FIGHTER PILOT
(over speakers)
Supreme Leader, shall we pursue?
[KYLO REN says nothing and stares out into space.]
TIE FIGHTER PILOT
(over speakers)
Supreme Leader? Do you copy?
EXT. SPACE
[KYLO REN spins his TIE FIGHTER 180 degrees and flies back to CORUSCANT.]
EXT. CORUSCANT - SENATE BUILDING - EVENING
[KYLO REN lands his TIE FIGHTER at the SENATE BUILDING as a powerful thunderstorm sweeps through the city.]
INT. SENATE BUILDING
[KYLO REN heads into the empty building and hears a SHRIEKING CRY. KYLO REN follows the SHRIEKING CRY and eventually reaches a private office below the SENATE CHAMBERS - an office formerly occupied by EMPEROR PALPATINE. The room is dark and in disrepair. KYLO REN hears the SHRIEKING CRY again. Reaching out with one hand, KYLO REN uses the FORCE to crush one of the wall panels, revealing a SECRET PASSAGEWAY.]
[KYLO REN walks down the narrow passageway which opens to a dim CHAMBER; empty except for the JET BLACK MONOLITH standing at the chamber's center. Roughly seven feet tall, the MONOLITH seems to call out to KYLO REN. KYLO REN removes his glove and places his hand just inches from the surface of the MONOLITH.]
KYLO REN
(curious)
What are you?
[KYLO REN turns to see GENERAL PRYDE enter the chamber. KYLO REN says nothing as PRYDE strides up to the MONOLITH.]
PRYDE
It is called the Omen of Darth Bane.
KYLO REN
What do you know of the Dark Lords?
[PRYDE smiles.]
PRYDE
We are the Sith Eternal.
[PRYDE holds up his left hand. In the palm is a TATTOO that seems to shimmer as if made with holographic ink.]
KYLO REN
I have no patience for conjurers and soothsayers.
[KYLO REN attempts to choke GENERAL PRYDE with the FORCE. It has no effect. The TATTOO on PRYDE's hand glows as if burning and painful. KYLO REN appears confused.]
PRYDE
(straining)
We are the Hands in the Dark (OR “Hands of the Dark Side”). The Jedi prophesied that the Sith would be destroyed. Your grandfather fulfilled that prophecy when he killed Emperor Palpatine.
[KYLO REN ceases his attempt to choke PRYDE.]
KYLO REN
Luke Skywalker killed Palpatine.
PRYDE
The Sith Masters were prepared for the outcome, and so they poured their knowledge (OR “souls’) into this. They knew a day would come when someone powerful enough would take the mantel and resurrect the Dark Lords of the Sith.
KYLO REN
Leader Snoke?
PRYDE
Was one of us. A harbinger. Sent to destroy any lasting legacy of the Jedi. Removing any possible threat to the New Order. Snoke was grooming you for this day.
[KYLO REN watches as other DARK FIGURES enter the chamber in silence. All of the DARK FIGURES have the same TATTOO in the palms of their hands as PRYDE does. The DARK FIGURES begin to chant quietly.]
PRYDE
(continued)
Supreme Leader. Master of the Knights of Ren. Heir to Darth Vader and the Dark Lords of the Sith. This power is rightfully yours.
[KYLO REN removes his MASK and reaches out to touch the OMEN OF BANE. KYLO REN rests his palm on the surface of the OMEN OF BANE. Nothing happens. The DARK FIGURES stop chanting. Both KYLO REN and PRYDE are shocked.]
KYLO REN
No.
PRYDE
(confused)
But... it called out to you.
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[KYLO REN holds back his rage.]
KYLO REN
No... Not me. It called to HER!
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